toshema's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Yocco]

Wow, awesome ! I love the crazy color palette !

VITOVIK responds:

Thanks you a lot!

[Experiment]

Awesome work !!! I'm glad to see your work here buddy !!

kiareri responds:

Glad to see your work here!

[Weird Dog]

Interesting creature..

Is it a deerdog?

fabulous999 responds:

It was going to be an alien, but then it started to look cute so I pushed it towards the small dog route.

[Scorching the Evil Snowman]

OMG I find you ^_^ !!!

HI, I didn't know you were on newgrounds !! Anyways great work with this painting. I love the creative concept of an zombie snowman. also a very dramatic scene, go kid go flame the sucker !!!!!!

Jackaloftrades responds:

Nice!!! Feels awesome to see a familiar face/user ID.

I just got scouted recently. Thanks a bunch, i'm glad you like it :D. Can you add people as a friend on NG?

[Port City]

omg, thats gorgeous !!

Fantastic work !! give yourself a patt on the back for this one ^_^ !!

AlvinHew responds:

Hahaha!

Thanks for your review.

[The Dark Lord's lost battle]

Great work !!

Very epic, I like the fog like effect !!!

Xplored responds:

THanks!

[Methus' Tower]

Sweet atmosphere !!!!

It is sooo dark and awesome !!!! and I also wanted to thank you for the review ^_^ !!!

Xplored responds:

Thanks to you!

[Mustang Chase]

could use more range of values....

Over all your line work is solid, and good perspective work in the scene. What I think needs improvement is your range of values ( you have mostly mid-tones in the pic). your darks aren't dark enough, and you could have push the highlights a bit more too ( like the reflective surfaces of the cars).
Also, it looks like you took your tissue and smeared your mid-tones, instead work your pencil from your darkest shade too the lightest on each shape and form in the piece.

I sure hope this helps, and I can't wait to see how you improve ^_^ !!

Randy-355 responds:

Thanks for the tips. Perhaps when I get the use of a real scanner you can see the picture for what it really is. I had to play with the darks and lights in Photoshop because the scanner made most of the page a dull grey.

But, again thanks and I will keep this in mind!

[Jewel God]

Nice work !!!

I love this, good job !!!! and how in the world do you get a 5.22?

altrian responds:

It seems like someone's comment below got deleted (there was a spam comment down there v), so I'm guessing it messed up the score somehow.