toshema's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Geats-Werewolf]

Fantastic ^_^ !!!!!

This is great work as usual !!!! I love how you give him the brads and the tusk like teeth. Very original in a werewolf design.

[Port City]

omg, thats gorgeous !!

Fantastic work !! give yourself a patt on the back for this one ^_^ !!

AlvinHew responds:

Hahaha!

Thanks for your review.

[TShift]

Wow ^_^ !!

This looks sweet, and looks like it it took a very long time. Good job !!!!!!!!!

[The Dark Lord's lost battle]

Great work !!

Very epic, I like the fog like effect !!!

Xplored responds:

THanks!

[Methus' Tower]

Sweet atmosphere !!!!

It is sooo dark and awesome !!!! and I also wanted to thank you for the review ^_^ !!!

Xplored responds:

Thanks to you!

[Mustang Chase]

could use more range of values....

Over all your line work is solid, and good perspective work in the scene. What I think needs improvement is your range of values ( you have mostly mid-tones in the pic). your darks aren't dark enough, and you could have push the highlights a bit more too ( like the reflective surfaces of the cars).
Also, it looks like you took your tissue and smeared your mid-tones, instead work your pencil from your darkest shade too the lightest on each shape and form in the piece.

I sure hope this helps, and I can't wait to see how you improve ^_^ !!

Randy-355 responds:

Thanks for the tips. Perhaps when I get the use of a real scanner you can see the picture for what it really is. I had to play with the darks and lights in Photoshop because the scanner made most of the page a dull grey.

But, again thanks and I will keep this in mind!

[Jewel God]

Nice work !!!

I love this, good job !!!! and how in the world do you get a 5.22?

altrian responds:

It seems like someone's comment below got deleted (there was a spam comment down there v), so I'm guessing it messed up the score somehow.

[Deathwing]

OMG !!!!! thats soo awesome !!

I love the design of this dragon, and you show great painting technique with this piece ^_^ 10/10 !!

[Oi Boobies!]

I like it!!!!

The only thing I can go without is the mistreatment of the ladies girls. Anyways, I love the use of texture on the clothing.